English is one of the most spoken languages in the world, so a foreign language degree is very valuable. Some comments say "According to the ATC program is a bad decision". I completely disagree with this point of view because studying English language majoring in Banking and Finance gives students many advantages and extremely high job opportunities after graduation.
The first reason why studying at the ATC department is a great decision is because it helps students have many job opportunities after graduation. Studying this faculty, students can both learn more skills in the field of English and have expertise in the banking and finance industry. Therefore, students can have the opportunity to choose many majors after graduation such as: interpreter, translator, foreign language teacher, bank employee... This is a top priority for ATC students.
Besides, studying at ATC, students can hone a lot of language knowledge without having to spend a lot of time and money to study at foreign language centers. Currently, all majors require graduates to have a foreign language certificate, so students go to language centers to study. Instead, ATC students do not spend too much money and still have a lot of knowledge about the language.
Some people think that ATC faculty should not be studied for reasons such as: studying this faculty does not help students be good at a certain field, but studying ATC can help students be good at both fields, bringing many benefits for career path. Therefore, students must strive to study both the language and the economic field at the same time. Students find their own strengths to strive for excellence in a field they love. And the school also has to mobilize and help the students of ATC in career orientation.
In short, students studying at ATC always have a certain advantage in choosing a career and just trying to succeed will come to everyone.
English is one of the most spoken languages in the world, so a foreign language degree is very valuable. Some comments say "According to the ATC program is a bad decision". I completely disagree with this point of view because studying English language majoring in Banking and Finance gives students many advantages and extremely high job opportunities after graduation.
The first reason why studying at the ATC department is a great decision is because it helps students have many job opportunities after graduation. Studying this faculty, students can both learn more skills in the field of English and have expertise in the banking and finance industry. Therefore, students can have the opportunity to choose many majors after graduation such as: interpreter, translator, foreign language teacher, bank employee... This is a top priority for ATC students.
Besides, studying at ATC, students can hone a lot of language knowledge without having to spend a lot of time and money to study at foreign language centers. Currently, all majors require graduates to have a foreign language certificate, so students go to language centers to study. Instead, ATC students do not spend too much money and still have a lot of knowledge about the language.
Some people think that ATC faculty should not be studied for reasons such as: studying this faculty does not help students be good at a certain field, but studying ATC can help students be good at both fields, bringing many benefits for career path. Therefore, students must strive to study both the language and the economic field at the same time. Students find their own strengths to strive for excellence in a field they love. And the school also has to mobilize and help the students of ATC in career orientation.
In short, students studying at ATC always have a certain advantage in choosing a career and just trying to succeed will come to everyone.
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- Choosing a college major is always a controversial issue for both students and parents Some think that studying ATC is an unwise decision I completely disagree with this opinion because of the benefits of studying ATC such as a professional English enviro 67
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, as to, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1607.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08544303797 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8116425236 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.416752066 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.133333333 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.344827210177 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136491839026 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136235604681 0.0667982634062 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229474292724 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.230130662417 0.056905535591 404% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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