Advanced medical treatments are generally expensive. People's access to proper health care should not depend upon their level of income. All people have the right to access the best medicine available.
these days, man offices and institutions have made uniform compulsory in the working premises. this has both merits and demerits.
First off, companies following dress code are likely to be more organized in their structure of work. The only focus during the working hours will be completing the given task on time. Secondly when you have a strict policy of dress code there is lesser space for loose talks. The new generation spend a lot of money on the way they carry themselves this results in comparison of what they were, how much they spend on the costume. All these discussions often happen during the working hours. Lastly, in an organisation there would be different types of individuals irrespective of their age and the economic background. some people can afford on the other hand some cannot. So if there is a uniform for ever in individual working there will be a smooth work flow.
On the other hand, a dress code does not measure the work of an employee. It's not what they wear, it's how well they can perform their task. Organization's should should stop concentrating on what an employee wears rather focus on the quality of work. A employee wearing a uniform will not bring any change rather a proper training or some support to perform task better can result in better company's performance.
To sum up, I believe organization's should stop worrying on what the employees wear rather concentrate on the quality of work done. Thus making people wear uniforms in the office is not not going to make any difference in the production of work.
- Extreme sports such as ski diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extent do tou agree or disagree with this view 11
- Advanced medical treatments are generally expensive People s access to proper health care should not depend upon their level of income All people have the right to access the best medicine available 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1301.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83643122677 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5994780983 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561338289963 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4174170116 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.3125 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8125 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0677060094546 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0243395756215 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0201282113492 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0430713803529 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107890371985 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.19 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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