Vehicle theft in 4 different countries
The line graph illustrates the number of stolen cars in the UK, Sweden, France and Canada in the period of 9 years from 1990 to 1999
Overall, it can be clearly seen that UK described the highest rate between the given countries while, Canada had the lowest trend at the end of the period
To begin, UK stood with about 18 cars stolen, next 5 years it experienced fluctuation at the end of the given period and finished just under the starting number and remained higher than all three countries
France and Canada experienced almost the same trend approximately with 6 and 7 car thefts respectively in 1993 Canada showed a slight increase started from 5 and ended nearly with 6 stolen cars per 1000 however, France overtook Canada in the second given year, but in 1999 it experienced the same level of stolen cars as in Canada. Sweden is the only country which described increased numbers of thefts started a period with 8 and ended about 14 cars in 1999
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he lowest trend at the end of the period To begin, UK stood with about 18 cars st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, second, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 794.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6432748538 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43732700068 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 8.94146341463 22% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 85.0 22.4926829268 378% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 354.5 43.030603864 824% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 397.0 112.824112599 352% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 85.5 22.9334400587 373% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.5 5.23603664747 258% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0855526514835 0.215688989381 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104476282554 0.103423049105 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0460806870485 0.0843802449381 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502493794864 0.15604864568 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0317053650486 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 43.2 13.2329268293 326% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 10.58 61.2550243902 17% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 6.51609756098 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 32.9 10.3012195122 319% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.82 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.81 8.06136585366 134% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 55.0 11.4329268293 481% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 36.0 10.9970731707 327% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.