The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two pie charts illustrate the average percentage of households using energy in each classification and its gas emissions in Australia.
Overall, the largest energy is used for heating while gas emission from water heating takes the highest amount, and cooling energy is the least used as well as the least one gas releasing.
Regarding the first pie chart, 42% of energy is used for heating, which is also the highest, in contrast to the lowest one belongs to cooling activities of 2%. The following is 30 percent of water heating, which is double the amount of energy for other appliances. Refrigeration and lighting take 7% and 4% respectively.
According to the second chart, the highest amount of greenhouse gas comes from boiling water with the proportion being 32%, less than that is 28% exhausted gas from other appliances. Refrigeration and heating have the same proportion, 15%, and 14% respectively, which is also followed by 8% from lightning pollution, and the last one is gas from cooling devices, which only takes 3% in total.
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- Extreme sports such as sky diving and skiing are very dangerous and should be banned To what extend do you agree or disagree with this view 61
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- the graph below shows trends in U S meat and poultry consumption 87
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, regarding, second, so, well, while, in contrast, as well as, in contrast to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03448275862 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81822579255 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.545977011494 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 259.2 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.688827636 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.142857143 112.824112599 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.1428571429 5.23603664747 251% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292853625793 0.215688989381 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136888694792 0.103423049105 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831477790508 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196917553054 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440866065993 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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