In some countries, more and more adults are living with their parents after graduating from college, University, or even after finding a job. In many cultures, increasingly have adults and parents living together when they were grown up and graduated from school, even if they had jobs. Although this practice could have some benefits to both the parents and their off spring. I strongly argue that it could do more harm than good to a person in the modern society.
When adult children trying to live together will be at a disadvantages economically because instead of splitting it in two, the cost incurred for electricity, water and cleaning services only half the cost compared to living separately. Moreover, when you have sick, your parents will always be with you and take care of you, helping you get well quickly.
I, however, assert that the often-overlooked pitfall of living with one’s parents for too long can inflict irreparable damage to a person’s life and negate any benefits that its brings. When you living with parents you cannot do as you please but must obey some harsh rules of your parents. However, when you live alone you can do whatever you like, be free and develop yourself. The consequence of obeying parents too much is that many people can’t make their own decisions and lack of witness until they get married, they will look to their parent’s example. Today’s economy rewards ingenuity and assertiveness, compared to the economics of those who are negatively affected if that person is not given the opportunity to make reckless decisions early on.
In conclusion, children and parents living together have some benefits, yet the long-term outcome undesirable. I am supporter of this model should stop continuing.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 56, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a disadvantage' or simply 'disadvantages'?
Suggestion: a disadvantage; disadvantages
...dren trying to live together will be at a disadvantages economically because instead of splitti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1082.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15238095238 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80498422597 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.657142857143 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 337.5 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7397310628 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.222222222 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197028213865 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828378649525 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0556642896034 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137472789668 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105309647658 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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