The computer is arguably the most important invention of the past hundred years. I agree with this. Because with an increasingly modern life like this, device technologies are very necessary.
Because those are the people who help us a lot in this life and most of the number of people who use computers is also extremely large. Computer is very convenient for many people because it can go anywhere convenient for work away and where to go then that computer is a pretty stable loss in this account. And not only about making it small, it also has many features such as information search. This is one of the features that are used by many people because people still have many unknowns so it can provide information. . quickly and accurately. In addition, it can also create multiple archive files here are also features suitable for work and study. With the current covid-19 situation, many people have to stay at home, so having a computer is very necessary and important.
Finally, in my view the computer is the most important invention of the last hundred years
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 527, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...unknowns so it can provide information. . quickly and accurately. In addition, it...
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Line 1, column 529, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Quickly
...knowns so it can provide information. . quickly and accurately. In addition, it can als...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, so, still, then, in addition, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 14.0 41.998997996 33% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 721.0 1615.20841683 45% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 155.0 315.596192385 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65161290323 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47441709776 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 91.0 176.041082164 52% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587096774194 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.664596088 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.125 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.375 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21074662286 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865909123078 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0792208148643 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195995626105 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375429910673 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 78.4519038076 33% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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