With the accessibility of the Internet, the ways in which people spread information have been tremendously revolutionized. Some assert that we should continue to make use of physical books, while others argue otherwise. From my perspective, e-books will supersede paper books gradually.
Admittedly, it seems difficult to refute the idea that printed books still play an important role in society because of the following reasons. First of all, paper books are not susceptible to network problems or digital viruses. Therefore, tangible books are literally safer than virtual books to a certain extent. Second, blue-ray, which is a harmful ray to our eyes, does not exist in printed books, so it can prevent us from some eyes’ diseases. Also, there are no pop-up advertisements on paper books, and this means we can focus all our attention on reading materials. For these reasons, there does seem to be solid basis for the claim that printed books still play a significant part in the literary world.
On the other hand, it seems shorted-sight to contend that we need to discard e-books. In fact, digital books can efficiently save our space and money. In terms of space, countless books are digitally compressed into electronic books that seem like a small box containing various kinds of treasures. For example, there are approximately 1,340,000 books recorded in the WeChat Reading, which are more than the collection in the library of Peking University. If we have such a great number of paper books, it will roughly take us 26,800 cubic meter of space. Therefore, e-books can allow us to have more spare space to place whatever we like.
In addition, utilizing e-books are a cost-efficient way to record and disseminate information. Producing paper books require a huge mass of labor and material resources, both of which cost a lot of money, and the quantity of production totally depends on the demand in the market. However, in contrast, the marginal cost of electronic books is approaching zero. For instance, WeChat Reading spends 25 dollars converting a physical book into an e-book. Although the cost of producing an e-book is higher than that of producing a paper one, the e-book can be well-preserved and accessible to thousands of people simultaneously.
In conclusion, both of the two views have their cons and pros, but still, I maintain that the growing trend towards using digital books is irreversible, as the advantages of using e-books far outweigh the disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 323, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...tual books to a certain extent. Second, blue-ray, which is a harmful ray to our eyes, do...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2089.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13267813268 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9160240942 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 639.0 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9001327831 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4761904762 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.380952381 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.66666666667 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313346683829 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975236136906 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659057418786 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171769501362 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0370226371857 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 116.0 78.4519038076 148% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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