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Some people prefer shopping in shopping centers, while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each?
In this increasingly materialistic society, shopping has gained in popularity among many individuals. While some of them prefer to browse the spotless windows of retailers in shopping complexes, others would rather wander among the attractive stalls in local markets. Indeed, both locations boast certain features that appeal to specific category of consumers.
On one hand, shopping centers are ideal for busy workers seeking a variety of products to purchase and activities to indulge in. Their hectic work schedules often leave them little time for shopping, compelling them to do so in the even...
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No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 308 350
No. of Characters: 1647 1500
No. of Different Words: 197 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.189 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.347 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.543 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 139 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 106 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 68 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 38 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.707 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.333 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.551 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.09 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5