The graphs below show the enrolments of overseas students and local students in Australian universities over a ten year period.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two tables provided offers information on the amount of enrolments between overseas students and students local in the area in Australia Universities.
From the enrolment statistics of 2001 to 2010, local students seems to have an overall higher amount than from those overseas students by a significant large degree. both had a gradual increase over the years with the completed enrolments, with the commencing enrolments being apart from each other.
At first sight of the data, overseas students started out at 20 thousand total enrolments whereas local students had exactly 400 thousand's. The number of overseas students climbed in small steps to year 2003, local students receiving a steep rise in contrast. From then, both sets of data had steady upwards direction until 2008. At which point, the total enrolments for local students stopped growing as it had plateau'd at 600 thousand-- overseas students merely continued to grow where it reached just above 80 thousand on the same year.
On the other hand, the starting numbers for on-progress enrolments for the sets of data was as large as a ten times difference. On year 2002, local students' data peaked wherein overseas students didn't had any significant changes. it changed by year 2006 when the overseas students had seen consistent escalation as it reached 40 thousand on 2010. local student's commencing enrolments; However, merely had minor adjustments and generally stayed on the 200 thousand mark per year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Both
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
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Suggestion: didn't
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Suggestion: It
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Local
...tion as it reached 40 thousand on 2010. local students commencing enrolments; However...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, then, whereas, apart from, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1255.0 965.302439024 130% => OK
No of words: 237.0 196.424390244 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29535864979 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68500345119 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 106.607317073 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565400843882 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.274294635 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.090909091 112.824112599 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5454545455 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.23603664747 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304128218642 0.215688989381 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137655261121 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708874658907 0.0843802449381 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21174499731 0.15604864568 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289708085715 0.0819641961636 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.