Our society have developed relentlessly throughout the history. However, tradition still worth-saving due to its sentimental value . Although there is some people acclaim that traditions should be kept to educate our young generations.,I believe individuals have the rights to behave in their own way.
On the one hand, traditions have more than outdated views. By transpiring moral lessons such as the significance of unity, youngsters can inherit a myriad of valuable virtues from ancestry, so they would feel guilty and embarrased when committing a wrongdoing. Furthermore , traditions play a vital role in nurture youngsters’gratitude to ancestry, without traditions, our society would be alienated and heartless.
On the other hand, pushing traditional boundaries can incentivise some novel ideas, especially in costumes. Some conventional clothes are too sophisticated to wear such as Ao Dai , Kimono or Hanbok, which needs modernizing or combining with low-key outfits for convenience. Besides, errorneous conception formed during evolution process is inevitable. Take confucianism for example, which makes Asian believed men are always pivotal than women, thus women have neither rights nor equalty in feudalism. Such these heinous mindset should be eradicated for a better future.
By and large, rigidly following traditions will cause repercussion in some circumstances. Henceforth, autonomy ought to be encouraged with merits of tradition as a foundation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, however, if, so, still, thus, for example, such as, by and large, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.89252336449 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.35465513247 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.742990654206 0.561755894193 132% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9096939694 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2857142857 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212340491259 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682215766144 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677812090428 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123714933192 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0669033125388 0.056905535591 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.33 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.29 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.5 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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