The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study area

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The diagrams illustrate the design of a single and double room study
area.

Submitted by yjjjj on Sun, 02/13/2022 - 03:35

The diagrams show the layout of two rooms with study facilities.
Overall, despite the more expensive cost, the double room has more cubboards, beds and study desks than the single one.
The cost of a single room is only 200$, while the latter one has a dearer amount of 350$ per week. Both rooms have a length of 6 metres, but the double room is 4 metres wide, compared to a modest amount of 2.5 metres in the single room.
In the single room, there are two bookshelves between the bathroom and the kitchen, while the double room has an extra table in the centre. There are also two beds, each of which is next to the window in the double room, while the single room has a TV and a study desk at opposite walls.
Both kitchens have stoves, sink and a microwave. However, the single room has 1 less cubboard than the double room, in which the TV is behind them. The double room also has its study desks at opposite walls, and between one of them and the bathroom is a bookshelf.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...one. The cost of a single room is only 200$, while the latter one has a dearer amou...
^^^^
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$350'.
Suggestion: $350
...e the latter one has a dearer amount of 350$ per week. Both rooms have a length of 6...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33513513514 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09824442253 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481081081081 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0416395752 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390394710908 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185854410365 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778868356112 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2437106103 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275793031126 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 35, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$200'.
Suggestion: $200
...one. The cost of a single room is only 200$, while the latter one has a dearer amou...
^^^^
Line 3, column 85, Rule ID: CURRENCY[1]
Message: The currency mark is usually put at the beginning of the number: '$350'.
Suggestion: $350
...e the latter one has a dearer amount of 350$ per week. Both rooms have a length of 6...
^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33513513514 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.09824442253 2.65546596893 79% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.481081081081 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.0 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.0416395752 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 112.824112599 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5555555556 22.9334400587 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390394710908 0.215688989381 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.185854410365 0.103423049105 180% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778868356112 0.0843802449381 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.2437106103 0.15604864568 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275793031126 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.89 11.4140731707 69% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 8.06136585366 80% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 40.7170731707 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.