In the past, many international sports event were held in different nations such as Olympic or world cup in South Africa. Despite of being well-known by sport lovers around the world, other people think it exerts a detrimental effect on their daily life aspects and financial as well . In my opinion, the second statement partially convinced me for some reasons.
On the one hand, holding an international event such as world cup could bring many benefits to the hosted nation and the citizens. There would be more job opportunities for the unemployed because the preparation of a large scale event required a lot of manpower. Futhermore, the event could stimulate the development of the economy as well as a good chance to be well-known globally. For example, the South Africa organised the world cup in 2010 and there was a famous MV “Waka Waka” on youtube to advertise for this event. After that, the south africa economy and tourism rose dramatically after a year.
On the other hand, the drawback of an international event is similar to the hidden part of a floated ice, it cannot be seen easily and hidden a detrimental influence on a nation’s budget. For instance, the Olympic held by an anonymous nation cost a lot to be well-prepared from workforce to financial condition. Hence, that country is likely to be in debt that cannot be loaned within years but decades because money is the keypoint to held this enormous scale sport event.
In conclusion, hosting an international sport could stimulate a country’s economy and tourism. However, that nation could bear a huge financial burden that will takes times to be paid.
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- It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents for instance for sport or music and others are not However it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician 78
- Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment D 73
- Some people think that it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams e g football However some people think that it is more beneficial to play individual sports e g tennis and swimming Discuss both views and give your opinion 73
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 33, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
In the past, many international sports event were held in different nations su...
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Line 1, column 284, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...daily life aspects and financial as well . In my opinion, the second statement par...
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Line 2, column 473, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: Waka
... cup in 2010 and there was a famous MV “Waka Waka” on youtube to advertise for this event...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, however, if, second, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94927536232 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80688184141 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547101449275 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6146589179 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6153846154 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253731777866 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0975091453583 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0930106995128 0.0667982634062 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168025811518 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311218829637 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.43 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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