Recently, online shopping and services are becoming more popular among many customers than ever before. In my opinion, two of the main reasons why people buy using the internet are that it can provide purchasing remotely and safe delivering services. However, there are some disadvantages in case products may not be like as they seem as you buy.
To begin with, online shopping provides customers with more several kinds of convenient availabilities than real stores. In online shopping system, customers have variety choices and it does not take so much time to order product as they have no time apart from their career jobs and personal lives. Additionally they can be able to purchase from anywhere all over the world as well as pay via virtual wallets. Almost all the customers prefer to buy products from two giant e-shopping companies, Amazon and AliExpress. They are more reliable than any other online shopping stores and the important aspect they provide an insurance check as their product is original and not the fake one.
But on the other side, e-shopping has some disadvantages too. There some people who order their product by paying in advance believing on social media online store accounts and in some cases they are deceived by fraudsters. For instance, on Instagram, so many people run their online businesses and try to gain more customers by giving reliable sources But some of them just want to make money and use others' advertisement of products. Furthermore, customers can be easily lied by ordering products by their covers and when they receive they may not be like they want.
Overall, customers should check how much reliable the e-store and how their clients react on their work. But if it is too expensive thing, they should just buy in real stores.
Recently, online shopping and services are becoming more popular among many customers than ever before. In my opinion, two of the main reasons why people buy using the internet are that it can provide purchasing remotely and safe delivering services. However, there are some disadvantages in case products may not be like as they seem as you buy.
To begin with, online shopping provides customers with more several kinds of convenient availabilities than real stores. In online shopping system, customers have variety choices and it does not take so much time to order product as they have no time apart from their career jobs and personal lives. Additionally they can be able to purchase from anywhere all over the world as well as pay via virtual wallets. Almost all the customers prefer to buy products from two giant e-shopping companies, Amazon and AliExpress. They are more reliable than any other online shopping stores and the important aspect they provide an insurance check as their product is original and not the fake one.
But on the other side, e-shopping has some disadvantages too. There some people who order their product by paying in advance believing on social media online store accounts and in some cases they are deceived by fraudsters. For instance, on Instagram, so many people run their online businesses and try to gain more customers by giving reliable sources But some of them just want to make money and use others' advertisement of products. Furthermore, customers can be easily lied by ordering products by their covers and when they receive they may not be like they want.
Overall, customers should check how much reliable the e-store and how their clients react on their work. But if it is too expensive thing, they should just buy in real stores.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...ion, two of the main reasons why people buy using the internet are that it can prov...
^^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...m their career jobs and personal lives. Additionally they can be able to purchase from anywh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, apart from, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99331103679 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54020808776 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8321601942 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31734348465 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123454226905 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153242673967 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23455729169 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.237264827306 0.056905535591 417% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: BUY_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'by'?
Suggestion: by
...ion, two of the main reasons why people buy using the internet are that it can prov...
^^^
Line 3, column 301, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Additionally,
...m their career jobs and personal lives. Additionally they can be able to purchase from anywh...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, well, apart from, for instance, as well as, in my opinion, in some cases, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1493.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99331103679 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54020808776 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 473.4 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8321601942 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.642857143 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3571428571 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31734348465 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123454226905 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.153242673967 0.0667982634062 229% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23455729169 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.237264827306 0.056905535591 417% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.