The two maps below show road access to a city Hospital in 2007 and in 2010
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant
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The giver map illustrates the change in the road access to a city Hospital from 2007 to 2010
on the whole, the hospital had witnessed massive changes in areas primarily related to cope increasing urbanization
The most conspicuous change had been made at the near places of hospital road. Where bus station had been bulit by removing all the bus stop near to hospital road. Moreover two roundabouts had been constructed by connecting Hospital,bus station and city road on either end of Hospital road. The road (ring road and Hospital road) all re main same
The changes were mainly around the hospital and the largest of these was related to parking .In 2007 there was a small port parking lot along Hospital road for both staff and th public .By 2010 they had decided to separate the public and staff parking by adding on exclusively public parking areas running along the east side of the city Hospital
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...de at the near places of hospital road. Where bus station had been bulit by removing ...
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...all the bus stop near to hospital road. Moreover two roundabouts had been constructed by...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83125 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42360216611 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 88.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 22.4926829268 178% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 132.265594544 43.030603864 307% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.25 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.0 22.9334400587 174% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5 5.23603664747 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 1.69756097561 648% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249976338423 0.215688989381 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.153229381397 0.103423049105 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348307219477 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165187871894 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103894192589 0.0819641961636 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.2329268293 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 61.2550243902 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.3012195122 172% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.9970731707 164% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.0658536585 163% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.