Nowadays, it is a trend of moving one country to other nations. Every year many families are migrating to other nations for work. Many people argue that this trend is beneficial for offspring life. While, others believe that children face more difficulties when moving abroad. In my opinion the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will discuss both the view along with my perspective.
On the one hand, there are myriad of advantages for children to migrate from one nation to other countries. First of all, when children move to other country they come to know about new language and when they learn different languages they develop their multilingual skills. Moreover, children get a wide opportunity of quality education which aid to become versatile as well as living standard of children also increase because they get better community for living which help to grow mentally and better way. For example, a survey was conducted by the department of education in USA which revealed that children who moved to abroad they are versatile and perform any work in more superior way. Hemce, it is quite clear that families migration help the children to develop new skills.
On the other hand, migration to other countries children face many difficulties. Firstly, it is easy for children move to other nations because its hard to adjustment in particular nation because evey thing new for children they face challenge to making new friends as well as kids get a cultural shock its very hard for them to adjust in new culture. Apart from that weather change may effect the children health because certain types of disease are available in the world. So, some time they effected with new types of disease.
To conclude, although relocating have some advantage and disadvantage for children yet i believe that To conclude although selerating have some advantage and disadvantage for children Yet I believe that this trend has a more benefities for offspring because they get an opportunity to learn new language as well as they get a chance to access into new education system.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, for example, in particular, as well as, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03151862464 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5910343183 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.501432664756 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 556.2 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.8349725263 49.4020404114 180% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.75 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8125 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.285609048164 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104368997636 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568820718211 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191690043033 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891643977045 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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