The supplied vertical bar graph illustrates the information about the women of district age group who became mother first time, in the year of 1966,1986,2006. Overall, it is lucid that majority of women gave birth in adult age; whereas, negligible ration delivered child in the last phase of their life. By analysing the details, it is vividly seen that in Initial year female who were under 19 gave birth to their first child with the ratio of around 35℅ ; however, after two decade that ratio dramatically decreased and in last year accounted for 10℅.By contrast, large proportion of female became mother, in the yera of 1996 which was followed by 60℅ . Likewise, ratio of this age group , in 2006 significantly plummeted from 60℅ to 40℅ . Scrutinizing further, the figure for women aged 40+ remained almost stable approximately 2℅and 4℅ throughout the period. While the percentage of 30-34 and 34-39 ge group became mother with the ratio of under 20℅ , in 1986 , but surprisingly these both age group experienced an upward thred, in 2006.
- Task 1 The chart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966 1986 and 2006 56
- The key to solving environmental problems is for the present generation to sacrifice their convenient life or live a less comfortable life for the sake of future generations To what extent do you agree or disagree 73
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, likewise, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 879.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 173.0 196.424390244 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08092485549 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.62669911048 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72641724962 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 106.607317073 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658959537572 0.547539520022 120% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 86.3064629999 43.030603864 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.5 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8333333333 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.16666666667 5.23603664747 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 1.69756097561 766% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257113294328 0.215688989381 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127630483996 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0756537191709 0.0843802449381 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257113294328 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.2329268293 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 61.2550243902 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.78 11.4140731707 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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