Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this is has become a debatable issue whether parts places should be used for residential areas. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be enforced in conclusion.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favour, first of all, now a day, most of people need to build or find place near to urban areas. This is because, suburbs has less facilities are available in countryside. The second point is the availability of transport system is not developed in suburbs. To exemplify, people move to countryside for better employement and find new advancement in lifestyle as a consequence, local authorities problems can be resolved by building houses in recreational places.
Moving towards the second argument of this debate, the first point of this issue is, housing issues cannot be solved by building in park areas as it is a place where people find leisure times after their hectic life style. For instance, recreational areas helps people to relax and rejenuvating themselves.
Apart from this, air pollution will be more in this areas due to cut down of trees since trees play an important role in control the air pollution. As a result, life in this cities would be suffocated and horrible, more people will get diseases as more chance of air pollution.
In conclusion, I would retrieve that although there are benefits for officials in constructing houses in park lands, however, the life of people would be immeasurable due to that.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 113, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...in its favour, first of all, now a day, most of people need to build or find place near to urb...
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Line 2, column 205, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun facilities is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ban areas. This is because, suburbs has less facilities are available in countryside...
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Line 2, column 474, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...tyle as a consequence, local authorities problems can be resolved by building hou...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...the air pollution. As a result, life in this cities would be suffocated and horrible...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ople would be immeasurable due to that.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1366.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94927536232 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74648196808 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.5171075212 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.833333333 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892083589553 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0341884829737 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0247186061169 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0522919949577 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0143173672705 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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