Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per their distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debate able issue whether youngsters should get involved in community work or not. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in conclusion.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in its favor. First of all, our young ones should understand the value of life is not only earning money but also how to live in a society where many people face issues like lack of education, job and poor health. The second point is that, to learn moral values of society, our children should do some volunteer works in any non-profit organizations after their graduation on or before. In addition to this, if government regulate a law for the new appointment of employees in public sector, individuals could have more interested to do such activities. To cite an example, in India especially in Karnataka state doctorate students will get their certificate only after the compulsory one-year community service anywhere in the state.
However, moving towards the second argument of this debate, students invest their good time and money to complete the graduation thus, it is impossible to wait one more year to get a job to become a financially secured person as some students may already have financial commitments with banks. It can be mitigated if financial institutions could give any discount in interest for the amount taken by the students those who do any community service. For example, in India, State bank offered interest free loan for the students do the voluntary works.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, to get to know more about the country and society, it is best to recommend a compulsory voluntary service for the students and graduates.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1567.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99044585987 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73373280748 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601910828025 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2606827279 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.583333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1666666667 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.83333333333 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.129875527286 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462904369693 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0330619081235 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0757536492582 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201857708268 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.5 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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