In recent years, there were a lot of advertisements using different ways to promote with the developed technology. The argument of whether advertising encourages people to buy unuseful things or want to announce new products that may improve our lives. I am definitely convinced that advertisements post new products may lead our lives easily.
On the one hand, we are exposed to advertising in different ways every day, such as TV, mobile device, poster in the public area, etc. Someone said that a good advertisement should leave an impression on people's minds unconsciously, in order to let people can quickly remember their product when they saw another product or object. In consequence, some of the low self-control people may be affected by this kind of advertisements while the rapid change of the world, if products cannot capture people attention, the company will be kicked out the market.
On the other hand, advertising is one kind of method that allows company prompt their product and earn money. Such a famous electronic device company, Apple, will have a press conference every year. This conference not only issues their new product but also will distribute how is their coming strategy and plan on development. Its actions can attract people to invest in their development to make the future develop easily.
In my point of view, the main function of advertisements is to show some information to us. However, does the contact want to force people to buy is very dependent on personal behaviour. We need to inhale and understand what the message wants to tell us.
- You are going to study in a college in the UK next year You would like to stay in a college Hall of Residence Write a letter to the hotel making the arrangements In your letter give your accommodation requirements explain what your food needs are ask w 73
- You have seen an advertisement for part time work in a hotel for three months over the summer Write a letter to the manager In your letter Say what experience you have Ask what the work involves Enquire about conditions 87
- You were invited to foreign country to give some workshop and a seminar Your flight was cancelled You had to take another flight On arrival at the airport you found out that your luggage had been lost You applied to the missing luggage department and 78
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find itvery difficult to work Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In your letterdescribe the situatio 73
- There have been several complaints about the reception area where visitors to your company arrive Your manager has asked you to suggest how the reception area could be improved Write a letter to your manager In your letter Describe the complaints tha 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 349, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ther product or object. In consequence, some of the low self-control people may be affected...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1331.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0608365019 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85783879021 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.627376425856 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 417.6 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8891511917 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.384615385 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2307692308 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315623601187 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108127802215 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0819905275557 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188118708972 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817146169571 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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