Dear Dr Brown,
I am writing a letter to inform you about I cannot continue the evening course due to my current job's working hours are not available for me to take the lesson.
I am Chris Wong who is a full-time employee in one of IT companies and take this part-time course in order to grow knowledge about my current job. However, my work partner will be leaving next week, I need to take over all of his work.
He is an overseas support programmer, and his customers' time-zone is 2 hours later than ours. Based on it, my off-work time delay to 8:00p.m. which totally conflict with class time.
Therefore, I cannot have the part-time lesson anymore. if possible, I would like to refund the rest of the course fee or provide a lesson discount for me.
Thank you for your time in consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours sincerely,
Chris Wong
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 56, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 731.0 937.175257732 78% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.62658227848 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51714995644 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696202531646 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 219.6 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.5219727165 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.303704790975 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120524921973 0.0766984524023 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880494331809 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168711528342 0.12726935374 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0795735170868 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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