The pie charts illustrate the information about revenue sources and expenditures for a year of children’s charity in the USA.
Overall, donated food was the major contributing categories for revenue sources in children’s charity in the USA while they spend the most money on program services. The total income of charity goes beyond the expenditures of charity in a year.
Donated food provided the most significant revenue source of children’s charity, it made up 86.6%. Community contributions come as the second large of charity income, almost one-tenth of income. The percentage of program revenue and other income was 2.2% and 0.4%, respectively. Other income is followed by investment income and government grants, both of those incomes were 0.2%.
Meanwhile, the charity spends the most money on program services, it made up 95.8%. Other categories were much smaller. The second most spending money was fundraising, it was one-fifth of community contribution. Spending money on management and general was 1.6%.
- You have a full time job and are also doing a part time evening course You now find that you cannot continue the course Write a letter to your tutor In your letter1 Describe the situation2 Explain why you cannot continue at this time3 Say what action 56
- Some people argue that it is not wise for an industry yo replace its experienced but old workers with new and young yet inexperienced individuals To what extent do you agree or disagree 56
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- The first car appeared on British roads in 1888 By the year 2000 there may be as 29 million vehicles on British roads Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use To what extent do 61
- People in all modern societies use drugs but today s youth are expertimenting with both legal and illegal drugs and at an increasingly early age Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example Discuss the cause 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 877.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 158.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55063291139 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98866228055 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 86.0 106.607317073 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544303797468 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 269.1 283.868780488 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 22.4926829268 62% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5418820468 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.7272727273 112.824112599 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.3636363636 22.9334400587 63% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.36363636364 5.23603664747 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262698554027 0.215688989381 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106225497244 0.103423049105 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0973027749371 0.0843802449381 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196797133976 0.15604864568 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104979364605 0.0819641961636 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.32 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.9970731707 69% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.