You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you have
some problems.
Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter
• explain your situation
• describe your problems
• tell him/her when you think you can start.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing to inform regarding the delay on the start date. I am suppose to start on June 13, 2015. However, some urgent family matters needs my presence and I must go home immediately to sort things out.
Our family is currently facing issues from the unexpected calamity happened over the weekend. A volcano erupted and it covers most part of our village. Fortunately, the whole family went out-of-town when the tragedy occurred. Yet, we felt sadness when we saw the aftermath. The rice fields were covered in ashes and there is nothing left to save. Communities are assisting one another as we all need to over come this unfortunate event. The town council and officials are closely monitoring the province and providing the basic needs.
I would like to request to move my start date on June 20th, Monday. By this time, I know that I am focused knowing that my family is out of danger. Just in case the new project could not wait for my long absence, I can definitely work from home as I understand that we need to meet our client's needs. My mobile line is always open for any inquiries.
Hoping for your kind consideration and I do apologize for the inconvenience caused.
Yours Sincerely,
Tom
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- You are due to start a new job next week but you will not be able to because you havesome problems.Write a letter to your new employer. In your letter• explain your situation• describe your problems• tell him/her when you think you can start. 70
I am writing to inform regarding the delay on the start date. I am suppose to start...
I am writing to inform the delay on the start date. I am supposed to start
family matters needs my presence
family matters need my presence
we felt sadness
we felt sad
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 18 10
No. of Words: 216 200
No. of Characters: 974 1000
No. of Different Words: 146 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.834 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.509 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.511 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 63 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 46 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 26 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 20 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 12 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.455 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.111 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.276 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.607 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.086 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4