This essay below give information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below. Make comparisons where relevant.
This table shows the information about underground railway systems in six different cities all over the world in terms of their size, age and the number of people who use them each year.
Overall, the three oldest railways surprisingly served passengers more than the newer systems. Tokyo railway reached the highest point in the number of passengers.
London railway is the earliest date opened in this table in 1863 and also the biggest system compared to the others with 394 kilometers of the route. Then the second largest system is the Paris railway, it opened in 1900 and contained 199 kilometers of the route. The last is the Tokyo system with 155 kilometers of route. However, it is the most use of people with 1927 million passengers per year, then 1191 million passengers by Paris systems and 775 million passengers by London railway.
Turning to the three newest railways, the Kyoto system is the smallest in the length of route with 11 kilometers. Then in Los Angeles which is over half bigger than the former system. The last railway is the oldest system in this group, Washington DC underground railway system opened in 1973 with 126 kilometers of route. The number of passengers who used them is 144 million in Washington DC, 45 million in Kyoto, and 50 million in Lo Angerless.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, second, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1083.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.87837837838 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47093731343 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 127.690721649 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.622605031667 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.0210688315 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4545454545 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 16.8248392259 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.18181818182 4.34317383033 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151429322947 0.216113520407 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628024436579 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0588982137943 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106640167191 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616188308436 0.0580467560999 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 8.37731958763 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 70.7449484536 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 8.71597938144 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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