Manufacturing instant noodles
The illustration shows the process by which instant noodles are produced.
Overall, there are series of eight stages starting from collecting amount of flour in the storage silos and culminating in the storage where ready products are labeled and sealed.
Firstly, the floor kept in the storage is taken to the mixer where certain amounts of water and oil is added to it. After this, from the mixture dough sheet is made after being rolled in a roller. Then, in the fourth stage sheets are cut and separated into strips which is turned to noodles discs in the next stage. In the cooking stage, ready discs are cooked in the hot oil and after this they are left for drying. In the last two stages once different kinds of fresh vegetables and species are put into manufactured cups, then full cups taken to the labeling stage where it is also sealed. After all these stages, instant noodles became ready for consumption.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 284, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'noodle'.
Suggestion: noodle
...eparated into strips which is turned to noodles discs in the next stage. In the cooking...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, then, after all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 764.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74534161491 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22923399445 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 106.607317073 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.60248447205 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 233.1 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3420918521 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5 112.824112599 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.625 5.23603664747 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175566280093 0.215688989381 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844964936908 0.103423049105 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10901190732 0.0843802449381 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143983108664 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118848717598 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 11.4140731707 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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