The pie charts below compare water usage in San Diego California and the rest of the world

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...f usage in 3 different sectors. Overall,the figures for all 3 sectors,agricultural,...
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.... Overall,the figures for all 3 sectors,agricultural,residential and industrial experienced ...
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...ienced an increase and decrease of which,the former company had the biggest growth,w...
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...he former company had the biggest growth,while the latter one had the least growth. ...
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... the second given region of the America.On the other hand,consuming water in Calif...
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... region of the America.On the other hand,consuming water in California had an increase in ...
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...ial sectors from 39% to 33% respectively,however these sectors in the world as a whole d...
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...l sector to 8% by homes. The proportion in San Diego County consisted under the ...
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...reased to nearly 60% in domestic sector.However,water consumption in farming sector was...
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...to nearly 60% in domestic sector.However,water consumption in farming sector was 17%.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, third, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 805.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 153.0 196.424390244 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2614379085 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.99872891932 2.65546596893 151% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 245.7 283.868780488 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.1300581587 43.030603864 212% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.25 112.824112599 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 22.9334400587 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.25 5.23603664747 272% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 1.69756097561 589% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234247727638 0.215688989381 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145928884721 0.103423049105 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115043728851 0.0843802449381 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145928884721 0.15604864568 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.115043728851 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 13.2329268293 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.91 61.2550243902 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 10.3012195122 176% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.06136585366 117% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 23.0 11.0658536585 208% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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