Some people believe that everyone has a right to have access to university education and that governments should make it free for all students no matter what financial background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that university education should be available to everyone and that the government should make it free for all students regardless of their financial situation. In my opinion, I strongly believe that this tuition fee should not be free.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why governments should invest money to help children to continue to have higher education. Firstly, this will encourage more citizens to become university students, which benefits the society greatly. This can be easily understood due to the facts that knowledge will lead to a more productive and educated workforce. This will help a country develop. Furthermore, people can earn enough money to contribute to family income.
On the other hand, if the government had to pay money for all students who want to continue their higher education, these countries would suffer the shortage of the national budget. Instead, this money can be invested in their economy, such as building more infrastructure like roads and electricity or health care, the environment, and agriculture. This will make the nation wealthier. Moreover, there is a lack of workers in many countries, especially in developed ones. By encouraging people from studying in college and encouraging them to participate in practical courses, there would be less unemployed workers, contributing to the growth of the economy.
In conclusion, although everyone has an equal chance to have further education when higher education is free, it seems to me that the local government should not make higher education free because this will affect the national budget.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34241245136 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85160122523 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.786998646 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.615384615 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7692307692 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.30769230769 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20797473005 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071593056915 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890955396922 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153813085453 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0906820341684 0.056905535591 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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