Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they shop. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a widely held view that adverts appear to be either irritating or amusing to viewers, and that such things would not affect people's choices when purchasing. From my perspective, I disagree with this point, due to several reasons presented in this essay below.
It is understandable why some complain about advertisement and claim that they are not influenced by these. One of the reasons is that when watching a film or video, both on TV or various Internet platforms, adverts suddenly pop up on the screens, which is the major drive to watchers' annoyance. This is because this would interrupt their moods, and such a tendency would result in them hurriedly skipping the content being marketed to continue the videos. Another explanation is that in this day and age, we are bombarded with tons of advertisements, which is challenging for one to particularly pay attention to a single brand, and thereby could not lure them into buying advertised goods when shopping.
Nonetheless, believe that these marketing activities would offer benefits for buyers and hence exert certain impacts upon them. Regarding the former, higher quality of life means that the demand for consumption has been experiencing an unprecedented surge, giving rise to people constantly purchasing new items to upgrade their living standards. If there are few adverts available, it would be challenging for many to find out the most suitable products for them. As for the latter, though advertising would not immediately tempt buyers to allocate their budget to that product, the brand name gradually creeps into our minds as the adverts are repeatedly shown on our phones or TVs. Such a trend, as a result, would urge people to buy items of the brand they remember when shopping.
In conclusion, although adverts at times trigger negative emotions among viewers, they are major contributors to people managing to possess what products they crave for. For the aforementioned reasons, I contend that they would exert great influence upon people’s shopping behaviors.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 41, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...There is a widely held view that adverts appear to be either irritating or amusin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, nonetheless, regarding, so, as for, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 331.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22054380665 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26537283232 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82119908925 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619335347432 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.6983519188 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.0 106.682146367 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5833333333 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229165026234 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869140937209 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673818902643 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147422612585 0.151304729494 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560526403614 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.36 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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