Advertising has become an inevitable part of our lives. Some people believe that it is a positive aspect of our lives while others are of opposite belief. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The importance of advertisement which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others are reject this notion. The substantial influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion the both proportion appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate my views for favouring the positive and negative impact of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.
Analysing the statement and explaining further, the first and the foremost reason behind this is that it can helps to grow the selling of products this includes, clothes ,footwear, electronic accessories and every product which newly launched in market. Another striking benefit in this regard is that consumers get good quality products on cheaper rates as some companies provide offers as well as discounts on their products so, it is good way to know about these offers by ad’s and save customers money. Categorically discussion, it cannot be ignored that the main reason behind this is that it helps manufacturers to contact public directly so they do not need to spend extra money for shopkeepers whose are between them. For example, there is a company naptol bachat bazaar in india it has very unique way for selling their products by advertising on television , they do not have any apps and shops in the market, they contact directly with customer by ad’s therefore, it is good for community to choose thing on lowest prices.
Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems from the fact is that some companies misused the advertisement , they promote addiction products like as tobacco, cigarettes, alcohol and other other things with the help of advertisement to incline the sell but it is injurious for health so people should not use it . Moving further, it is pertinent to mentioned that companies do not provide exact quality of products which they shown in advertisement because they only show the unreal products and attract public toward them that’s why, usually people change their mind to buy new things rather then, those which they use on daily basis because they trust on advertisement.apart from the reasons Mentioned above it can be clearly stated why some people are against of this trend.
The recapitulate, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach to a conclusion that the benefits of advertisements are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, so, then, therefore, thus, well, while, apart from, as to, for example, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2095.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 407.0 315.596192385 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14742014742 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49157444576 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8156114886 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 229.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.562653562654 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 647.1 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 108.231615735 49.4020404114 219% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 190.454545455 106.682146367 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.0 20.7667163134 178% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0891011747939 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395728912951 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039770182169 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0572505537705 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389034680455 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.3 13.0946893788 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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