There is a fact that purchasing a house is a strict problems which every adults have to deal with. Some people think that it is better to have a house rather than hiring one. I strongly disagree this opinion because each of options would have different reasons which I will in the following.
On the one hand, It is beneficial for residents to live in a rented house based on a few finance and traveling reasons. Firstly, Young people who are too old to to have enough money to buy a house. Instead of making a loan at a bank and living in paying-debt situations in a long time, they can have a temporary house and having a non-pressure in a early stage of an adult. Secondly, A house which is not our assets making human easy to change to other house located in numerous sites. For example, The Vietnamese people who change their jobs frequently have to setting a hired house would be better because it is more convenient than a stable home.
On the other hand, It is true that adult would like to have a home by themselves because of stable life. At the first glance, in the day and age, a people who is over 30 years old will start to small family themselves including Their child in next few years. Social will consider some emergencies and the weaker in their age. So having a house would help them be calm down to every situations. Moreover, a luxury house can express human being's position. I believe that some people consider if they should continues their relationship with others while they do not own a home. For example, in a lot of case, A woman can easily break up with a man without home because she tend to think that they she can become the poor if they depend on a poor man.
In conclusion, I do not think that which options would be better, settle in a own building or a rented one. People can chose their options depending on their situation, i believe, young people will choose a place to live temporarily because of money limitation or their travelling life, Whereas some people likely to handle a unchangeable life to have a family.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 53, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
...act that purchasing a house is a strict problems which every adults have to deal with. S...
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Line 2, column 86, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun finance seems to be countable; consider using: 'few finances'.
Suggestion: few finances
...ts to live in a rented house based on a few finance and traveling reasons. Firstly, Young p...
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Line 2, column 159, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: to
.... Firstly, Young people who are too old to to have enough money to buy a house. Inste...
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Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...rary house and having a non-pressure in a early stage of an adult. Secondly, A ho...
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Line 3, column 506, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[2]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'continue'
Suggestion: continue
...hat some people consider if they should continues their relationship with others while th...
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Line 3, column 672, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'she' must be used with a third-person verb: 'tends'.
Suggestion: tends
... up with a man without home because she tend to think that they she can become the p...
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Line 4, column 77, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...hich options would be better, settle in a own building or a rented one. People ca...
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Line 4, column 170, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...r options depending on their situation, i believe, young people will choose a pla...
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Line 4, column 325, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...e, Whereas some people likely to handle a unchangeable life to have a family.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 378.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44708994709 5.12529762239 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40933352052 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46601859795 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9195370713 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.8823529412 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2352941176 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180673464881 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0654426945379 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0706621613348 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121273675199 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0180652583774 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.83 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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