Today, many people prefer the vegetarian or vegan diet. They argue that a basic human diet could be possible without the inclusion of meat and animal product. In my opinion, I partly agree with this claim for some following reasons.
For the advantageous side of the matter, a plant-based diet does provide a various numbers of benefits. The most notable one of all is the reduced risk of some specific disease. Those who consume less animal product like red meat and animal fat proved to be less likely to suffer from heart failure, cardiac arrest and obesity. Because vegetarian diet is built around rich fiber consumption, they are theoretically healthier in comparison. The meat industry is also one of the leading carbon-emission source and thus reducing the demand for meat can reduce this. There is also the factor of morality taken into account when it comes to this. Animals are often mistreated during captivation and a numbers of species are purposely selectively bred for higher quality and quantity product.
On the other hand, I don't think we should overlook the downside of this lifestyle. Firstly, we are omnivorous for a reason. Plant-based diet only simply can't provide enough nutrient for an average human. The diet should be constructed by professional, and choosing the appropriate vegetable to be taken into a meal is crucial. This type diet already lead to a weaker build in human and slower healing speed. You can't build muscle of this meal plan, and you most definitely can't do heavy labor. The vegetarian life-style isn't recommended by expert to be practiced on children, women during pregnancy, post and pre-surgery patient.
In short, there is a lot of benefit as well as downside to excluding animal products out of your meal. I think it's better to apply a bit of everything, and do your research thoroughly before applying.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
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... in human and slower healing speed. You cant build muscle of this meal plan, and you...
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Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...this meal plan, and you most definitely cant do heavy labor. The vegetarian life-sty...
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... heavy labor. The vegetarian life-style isnt recommended by expert to be practiced o...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...side to excluding animal products out of your meal. I think its better to apply a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, thus, well, i think, in short, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00967741935 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7349227209 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616129032258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4722735325 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7368421053 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176038513964 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477978273862 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445163560311 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100150748252 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344561115048 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ntity product. On the other hand, I dont think we should overlook the downside o...
^^^^
Line 5, column 154, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... a reason. Plant-based diet only simply cant provide enough nutrient for an average ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 413, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
... in human and slower healing speed. You cant build muscle of this meal plan, and you...
^^^^
Line 5, column 474, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...this meal plan, and you most definitely cant do heavy labor. The vegetarian life-sty...
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Line 5, column 521, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
... heavy labor. The vegetarian life-style isnt recommended by expert to be practiced o...
^^^^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...side to excluding animal products out of your meal. I think its better to apply a...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, look, so, thus, well, i think, in short, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1553.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00967741935 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7349227209 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616129032258 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4722735325 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.7368421053 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3157894737 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176038513964 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0477978273862 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0445163560311 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100150748252 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344561115048 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.