Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree?
Many people think that vegetarian is healthier for those who prefer eating vegetables rather than meat. While I agree with this view, I believe that people should have meat in every their meals in order to have a good health.
On the one hand, There are several reasons why vegetarian benefits for human body. Firstly, scientists have proven that vegetarians have a lower risk of illnesses such as heart disease, diabetes, obesity and some forms of cancers. This is due to the fact that a healthy vegetarian diet is basically low in fat and high in fibre. Secondly, vegetables bring a wider range of nutritional needs for vegetarians. For example, raw spinach probably provides a source of vitamins such as vitamin A, E as well as by far calciums. Hence, instead of eating much meat so as to absorb these vitamins, we just need a bowl of raw spinach.
On the other hand, vegetarians are likely to face some difficulties if they do not eat meat. One of the difficulties is that individuals have to pay attention to choose the correct balance of vegetarian food not meet energy needs. If they are in a wrong way of choosing types of vegetables, this may lead to a malnutrition. Another difficulty is that vegetarian might have to change their cooking methods and habits as well. For instance, food which is eaten raw, steamed or stir-fried obtains much more minerals than that is boiled in water and deep-fried. Thus, traditional cooking methods in Vietnam should be rather applied for vegetarians. Those using western cooking method will have to change the cooking style or adopt a non-vegetarian diet.
In conclusion, although vegetarian has a positive effect our health, not everyone meets vegetarian diet. Therefore, they should be careful in selecting vegetarian foods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 557, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...ums. Hence, instead of eating much meat so as to absorb these vitamins, we just need a b...
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Line 5, column 244, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a wrong way" with adverb for "wrong"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...food not meet energy needs. If they are in a wrong way of choosing types of vegetables, this m...
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Discourse Markers used:
['first', 'firstly', 'hence', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'therefore', 'thus', 'well', 'while', 'as to', 'for example', 'for instance', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'as well as', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.258258258258 0.247107183377 105% => OK
Verbs: 0.147147147147 0.155533422707 95% => OK
Adjectives: 0.105105105105 0.0946595960268 111% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0600600600601 0.0501214627716 120% => OK
Pronouns: 0.027027027027 0.0437548338989 62% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135135135135 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.027027027027 0.0403226058552 67% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.76902373686 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.027027027027 0.0326793684256 83% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0810810810811 0.0861772015684 94% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.018018018018 0.021408717616 84% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00900900900901 0.011925033212 76% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1780.0 1933.35771543 92% => OK
No of words: 298.0 316.048096192 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97315436242 6.12580529183 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20517956788 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.345637583893 0.374742101984 92% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.258389261745 0.28420135186 91% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.174496644295 0.203846283523 86% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.127516778523 0.137316102897 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76902373686 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.037074148 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607382550336 0.56093040696 108% => OK
Word variations: 67.90520034 60.7387585426 112% => OK
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0891783567 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.5294117647 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.7945960507 49.517814964 42% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.705882353 127.492653851 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5294117647 20.7743622355 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11764705882 0.814263465372 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 3.99599198397 50% => OK
Readability: 43.3683379392 49.1944974215 88% => OK
Elegance: 1.79487179487 1.69124875643 106% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272654040193 0.332605444948 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0865557673527 0.102741220458 84% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0709682002913 0.0668466124924 106% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.464399068643 0.534860350844 87% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.14518154415 0.148594505496 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0925156260982 0.134430193775 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676547234283 0.0742795772207 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.23274952057 0.324371583561 72% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0999289196699 0.0638462369009 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171808675486 0.228012699653 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538256764073 0.058150111329 93% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.68436873747 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.41683366733 146% => OK
Positive topic words: 4.0 5.90881763527 68% => OK
Negative topic words: 3.0 2.5751503006 116% => OK
Neutral topic words: 3.0 1.9629258517 153% => OK
Total topic words: 10.0 10.4468937876 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.