Nowadays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.
These days a great number of people opt to work for themselves instead of working as an employee in a company or organization. There are various reasons why they do so. I would like to discuss some of the reasons in the following paragraphs for people being self-employed.
Firstly, nowadays people have become very much aware of the benefits of being self-employed and so there a large number of start-ups. They can be their own boss, there is no one to order them. Due to which they are free to implement their own ideas without waiting for other person to approve it. The other reason is that for being employed in an organization, one needs to be educated and needs to receive higher degrees if he wants to earn good. While start-ups does not require any qualification, even someone who has never been to school can open a business and make a favorable amount of money.
However, there are also some demerits of being self-employed. As the number of start-ups have grown to a huge extent the competition has increased a lot and it is really difficult to make a good place in the market. The person also has to take responsibility for all the people he has employed. Lastly, if a business fails, he owner may suffer loss which may bring stress and depression and may also affect his mental health. Also there is no guarantee that the self-employed person may earn sufficient amount of money to survive throughout his life. Whereas when a person who is employed in a company can be satisfied as he is sure that he will receive a pay-check at the end of the month.
All in all, many people fear cons of being self-employed and so they decide to be on a safe side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, really, so, whereas, while, as to, even so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.57475083056 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71400308389 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538205980066 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1546424941 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265107413357 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901998157423 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770822262808 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181655912177 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528839595528 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.25 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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