Environmental problems have become a major threat to all the earthlings. Some believe that the prime environmental problem of this era is the loss of specific flora and fauna, while other group of thinkers support that there more vital ecological issues. Before commenting on my opinion, I would like to discuss both the viewpoints in the following paragraphs.
To begin with, there are numerous calamities happening on earth. Some major ones are global warming, melting of iceberg, typhoons and dramatic changes in climate. All of these have negative impact son the environment. However, we humans are responsible for all these problems. The rise in levels of carbon dioxide is the reason for global warming. The warming of atmosphere melts the icebergs, because of which there is increment in sea levels. Climatic changes also lead to sudden drought and floods; due to which the plant and animals suffer.
The extinction of particular species of plants and animals creates fluctuation in food chains. For instance, if the carnivores like lions and tigers disappear, the number of herbivores will increase. The wild herbivores like deer, rabbits etc. may come to human environments and might eat up the farm produce. This will ultimately lead to food scarcity for everyone. Additionally, if a certain flora vanishes, people might face trouble. To exemplify, if the herb Basil dissipate from all over earth, humans will not be able to obtain the advantages they get from it now.
To conclude, I believe that the extinction of plants and animals is a crucial issue. Yet, the climatic changes and other catastrophes caused by it are major threats, as the very existence of life on this planet depends on it.
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- Many companies sponsor sports as a way of advertising themselves Some people think it is good for the world of sports while others think it is negative Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
- Nowadays many people choose to be self employed rather than to work for a company or organization Discuss the advantages and disadvantages 78
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...numerous calamities happening on earth. Some of the major ones are global warming, melting ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14574898785 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73651867864 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5875656676 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7647058824 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199443861217 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516119371794 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594321518012 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109783587776 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824071498334 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 66, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...numerous calamities happening on earth. Some of the major ones are global warming, melting ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1271.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14574898785 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73651867864 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611336032389 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 396.9 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.5875656676 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.7647058824 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5294117647 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64705882353 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199443861217 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0516119371794 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594321518012 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109783587776 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0824071498334 0.056905535591 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.