The maps illustrate the current and predicted future development of a small town.
Overall, Islip town will experiencing considerable changes in the next stages of plan. The main development in this area will be the construction of carriageway surrounding the town in the next following years.
As can be seen clearly on current map, there are still little facilities on center, while the countryside located in the north of town. Shops are located around the side of the main road, while a big area in the south are used to build housed for residents. The limited field are occupied by a southern park and southwestern school. Both of these structures are connect to main road by the side road.
Turing to the plan map, a circular road that goes around the city center attracts attentions. This road are expected to be built is a Dual carriageway. All new facilities are predicted to be located in the middle heart of the roads. the pedestrians only are projected to replace main road, while shops are demolished to make way for shopping centre and new housing. The southern housings park and school are not only planned to be remained unchanged, but also increase the size of park and school. Bus station and Car park are expected to be built next to the shopping centre.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 26, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'experience'
Suggestion: experience
... small town. Overall, Islip town will experiencing considerable changes in the next stages...
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Line 3, column 363, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'connected'.
Suggestion: connected
...rn school. Both of these structures are connect to main road by the side road. Turing ...
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Line 4, column 233, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...cated in the middle heart of the roads. the pedestrians only are projected to repla...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, still, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 7.0 257% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1056.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 221.0 196.424390244 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77828054299 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85565412703 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66815663077 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 283.868780488 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.07073170732 374% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.5276455105 43.030603864 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.2307692308 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 22.9334400587 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.07692307692 5.23603664747 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153255198762 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0571145403077 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534708339298 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116336688353 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437412063648 0.0819641961636 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.2329268293 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 11.4140731707 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.