The chart compares the different proportion of people living in Australia took part in some mental exercises, according to the age and sexes.
Overall, the women doing exercise more than men. The 45 - 54 aged women and the 15-24 aged men take up the highest percentage of people doing these kind of activities in 2010.
At the first glance, The women aged 35 to 64 exercising frequently accounted a high rate, almost over 52%, while these figures for men in the same age is much lower than, ranging from 39.5 to 45.1. On the other hand, The teenagers aged 15 to 24 had a opposite side. The number of boys doing mental activities account for 52,8%, which was slightly higher than that of girls in the same age, at 47.7%.
Turning to the two remaining age groups, around 48.9% people were in the age between 25 to 34 took part in activities on a regular level were mainly women, whereas this figure for the opposite sex was 42.2. Moreover, there is no significant various between male and female were from 65 or older in Australia, at 46.7% and 47.1%, respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 143, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... the highest percentage of people doing these kind of activities in 2010. At the first g...
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Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r hand, The teenagers aged 15 to 24 had a opposite side. The number of boys doing...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, whereas, while, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 876.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 190.0 196.424390244 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61052631579 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39673946808 2.65546596893 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 22.4926829268 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.8390117602 43.030603864 227% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.0 112.824112599 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.6666666667 22.9334400587 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1666666667 5.23603664747 213% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21696513314 0.215688989381 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117269042272 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568307742092 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136244452417 0.15604864568 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604845269525 0.0819641961636 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.2329268293 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.93 61.2550243902 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.05 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.9970731707 131% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.