Write about the following topic. In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because people had more children. Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
The expansion of almost families in the past was the result of people's beliefs about the number of members in a family in every corner of the world. Besides some strong points, I hold the belief that there are more hindrances to being a part of a big family.
Initially, children being brought up in a large family are poorly prepared to deal with the problems of adult lives. Numerous parents who take responsibility for family life had to devote a huge amount of time to work so they hardly made time for their families. Consequently, the lacking of parents' support, often lost of children's soft skills and right behavior. In addition, a big distance was shaped between parents and their children. Because of spending a large amount of time taking care of the family to earn money thus almost no trips and interactive activities were built up family bonds. As a case in point, many researches are studies by physicalists demonstrate that the feeling of lacking love can cause the experience of feelings of loneliness in children and that is why they tend to less confident in communicating. Therefore, it was harder for them to solve the obstacle and break the fence between two generations.
However, living without support from parents helped them did not become heavily reliant in daily life. For instance, as their parents were too busy with their work to afford food and garments for family: when issues occurred they had to try every possible effort to find the best solution which led to improvement in their solving ability. In addition, management skill was built up day by day by arranging chores for everyone properly. This led to an excellent result that older children became positive role models for who are not as old as them in family. Because of that, their parents did not have to worry about them when away far from home.
In conclusion, being a member of a large family have both benefits and drawbacks on the development of people's lives, I still believe that there is more disadvantages than advantages as people's living standard and burden are much better without excess.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 123, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lems of adult lives. As numerous parents who took responsibility for family life ...
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Line 3, column 237, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ctivities are to build up family bonds. As a case in point any researches are stud...
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Line 3, column 393, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...nce feelings of loneliness of children. Thats why it is hard to break the fence betwe...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun members is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ldbirth. I strongly believe that having less members is much more easier to bring up...
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Line 4, column 120, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...elieve that having less members is much more easier to bring up and take care of springoffs...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, thus, in addition, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1088.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77192982456 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63306828033 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59649122807 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 346.5 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9936502177 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214064426157 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.065646315228 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490376807521 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116737550999 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0584532993593 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.39 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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