Write about the following topic. In many parts of the world, families were larger in the past because people had more children. Do you think there were more advantages or disadvantages to being part of a large family in the past? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience. Write at least 250 words.
The expansion of almost families in the past was the result of people's beliefs about the number of members in a family in every corner of the world. Besides some strong points, I hold the belief that there are more hindrances to being a part of a big family.
Initially, children being brought up in a large family are poorly prepared to deal with the problems of adult lives. Numerous parents who take responsibility for family life had to devote a huge amount of time to work so they hardly made time for their families. Consequently, the lacking of parents' support, often lost of children's soft skills and right behavior. In addition, a big distance was shaped between parents and their children. Because of spending a large amount of time taking care of the family to earn money thus almost no trips and interactive activities were built up family bonds. As a case in point, many researches are studies by physicalists demonstrate that the feeling of lacking love can cause the experience of feelings of loneliness in children and that is why they tend to less confident in communicating. Therefore, it was harder for them to solve the obstacle and break the fence between two generations.
However, living without support from parents helped them did not become heavily reliant in daily life. For instance, as their parents were too busy with their work to afford food and garments for family: when issues occurred they had to try every possible effort to find the best solution which led to improvement in their solving ability. In addition, management skill was built up day by day by arranging chores for everyone properly. This led to an excellent result that older children became positive role models for who are not as old as them in family. Because of that, their parents did not have to worry about them when away far from home.
In conclusion, being a member of a large family have both benefits and drawbacks on the development of people's lives, I still believe that there are more disadvantages than advantages as people's living standard and burden are much better without excess.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 383, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'day by'.
Suggestion: day by
...addition, management skill was built up day by day by arranging chores for everyone properly....
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Line 4, column 140, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are more disadvantages'?
Suggestion: there are more disadvantages
... of peoples lives, I still believe that there is more disadvantages than advantages as peoples living stand...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, consequently, however, if, so, still, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1744.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84444444444 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58838216309 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563888888889 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.5287313019 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.266666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256554202577 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752378616946 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616802044137 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162561623559 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609723135595 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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