Since time immemorial, health has been a popular topic of research. Scientists have published infinite research papers on activities that are good and bad for health. However, a huge number of people ignore the health warnings and continue to engage in unhealthy activities. In this essay, a few such unhealthy habits will be discussed and possible causes of indulgence of people in such activities will be analysed, Suggestions to tackle unhealthy habits will also be listed.
Firstly, the most unhealthy habit that results in the death of thousands of people worldwide, every year, is cigarette smoking. The tobacco and nicotine content in cigarettes has been proved to be the cause of lung cancer among smokers. Secondly, consumption of alcohol is another unhealthy practice that is affecting the lives of millions of people worldwide. According to medical experts, excessive consumption of alcohol causes irrepairable damage to the lives and digestive system. Thirdly, increased consumption of sugary fizzy drinks has many harmful effects on the human body and has provided to be the leading cause of diabetes and childhood obesity.
The main reason for educated people to continue indulging in activities that are known to be harmful to their health is their addiction to certain things. People who are addicted to smoking and drinking often indulge in these activities to calm down or relieve their stress.
Tackling this widespread problem requires governmental intervention, in my opinion. If more takes are imposed on cigarettes, alcohol and fizzy drinks, they will become expensive, which might force people to give them up. Besides, more awareness campaigns to highlight the detrimental effects of smoking and drinking should also be organised.
To sum up, indulgence of people in unhealthy activities is mainly due to their addiction to certain things. Imposition of higher taxes on some products might make them out of the reach of a few people; however total abstinence will only be possible if people take the initiative themselves to give up their unhealthy habits in order to lead a healthier and more meaningful life.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 10.5418719212 180% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 8.36945812808 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 5.94088669951 101% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 31.9359605911 178% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1809.0 1207.87684729 150% => OK
No of words: 339.0 242.827586207 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33628318584 5.00649968141 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 3.92707691288 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79678999337 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 139.433497537 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548672566372 0.580463131201 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 379.143842365 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 4.6157635468 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4308707489 50.4703680194 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.0625 104.977214359 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1875 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.625 7.25397266985 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 2.75862068966 399% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267441159081 0.242375264174 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827734836922 0.0925447433944 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593949627039 0.071462118173 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144190034417 0.151781067708 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.078196805255 0.0609392437508 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 12.6369458128 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 53.1260098522 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 10.9458128079 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 11.5310837438 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.5123152709 133% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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