Causes and solutions of global warming
Well, let me tell you about some causes and solutions of global warming.
Global warming, the rise in temperature around the earth's atmosphere.
There are a number of reasons why the earth is getting warmer than ever before.
First of all, the main cause is numerously exhausted fume from vehicles.
In my opinion, the most effective measure to solve this problem is using green methods of transport: ride a bicycle or just walk.
Besides, we also should plant more trees. More trees can take in carbon dioxide and give off oxygen. A single tree can absorb on tan CO2 in its lifetime.
In addition, the desforestation to make way for farming also contributes to global warming. I think we should cut down on using of products are made from wood.
In particular, organizing some campaigns putting rules to protect environment, helping humans identified the effects of global warming.
Concurrently, raising awareness responsibility and encouraging the people to grow more and more trees.
Furthermore, global warming also results from the toxic waste from Industrialisation. For example, when coal is burnt to make electricity, it produces large amounts of greenhouse gases and other pollutants, such as oxides of sulfur and nitrogen driving climate change.
I believe that discouraging use of fossil fuels for vehicles, instead of, promoting usage of renewable source of energy such as solar energy, tidal power and wind power is more effective.
In conclusion, global temperature has severe impacts on our life, which needs to be addressed at the priority. The government and all the individuals should join hands to reduce this eminent threat and save earth as well as future generations.
Well, let me tell you about some causes and solutions of global warming.
Global warming, the rise in temperature around the earth's atmosphere.
There are a number of reasons why the earth is getting warmer than ever before.
First of all, the main cause is numerously exhausted fume from vehicles.
In my opinion, the most effective measure to solve this problem is using green methods of transport: ride a bicycle or just walk.
Besides, we also should plant more trees. More trees can take in carbon dioxide and give off oxygen. A single tree can absorb on tan CO2 in its lifetime.
In addition, the desforestation to make way for farming also contributes to global warming. I think we should cut down on using of products are made from wood.
In particular, organizing some campaigns putting rules to protect environment, helping humans identified the effects of global warming.
Concurrently, raising awareness responsibility and encouraging the people to grow more and more trees.
Furthermore, global warming also results from the toxic waste from Industrialisation. For example, when coal is burnt to make electricity, it produces large amounts of greenhouse gases and other pollutants, such as oxides of sulfur and nitrogen driving climate change.
I believe that discouraging use of fossil fuels for vehicles, instead of, promoting usage of renewable source of energy such as solar energy, tidal power and wind power is more effective.
In conclusion, global temperature has severe impacts on our life, which needs to be addressed at the priority. The government and all the individuals should join hands to reduce this eminent threat and save earth as well as future generations.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...ing, the rise in temperature around the earths atmosphere. There are a number of rea...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the toxic waste from Industrialisation. For example, when coal is burnt to make ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88328418612 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684981684982 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5299116784 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4117647059 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306046026476 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927766096243 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134265087746 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121281758758 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147224541027 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 52, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'earths'' or 'earth's'?
Suggestion: earths'; earth's
...ing, the rise in temperature around the earths atmosphere. There are a number of rea...
^^^^^^
Line 11, column 87, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the toxic waste from Industrialisation. For example, when coal is burnt to make ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, furthermore, if, so, well, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, in particular, such as, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1435.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25641025641 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88328418612 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.684981684982 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5299116784 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4117647059 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0588235294 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.82352941176 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 4.38176352705 274% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306046026476 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0927766096243 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134265087746 0.0667982634062 201% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121281758758 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147224541027 0.056905535591 259% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.93 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.