Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give opinions
early childhood education is widely considered a vital element of a child’s development. However, many opponents state that children should be allowed to attend school until the age of seven. Both viewpoints are justifiable, which will be discussed in this essay.
Proponents of early schooling indicate that nursery education has a beneficial influence on children’s life. Firstly, children’s brains are highly sensitive to the surroundings around them, thereby providing a responsive, engaging, and supportive environment in which they can live and learn is crucial. By doing this, children have the opportunity to explore the world around them and access to numerous knowledge, which develop their talents as well as potential. In addition, nursery education helps the children to be well-prepared before entering primary schools since they can acquire basic knowledge of the alphabet and calculations like addition or subtraction. also, they are taught other necessary skills in general which develop a sense of independence; therefore, children will not have to waste time trying to get familiar with classroom settings or making new friends.
On the other hand, keeping children till seven years old has its own merits. One of the primary advantages is children are able to develop uniquely if they are allowed to delay their entrance to formal schooling. this is the period when their memories and traits of characters are formed, which have last-long influence on their well-being in the rest of their lives. Consequently, the late start of schooling seemingly enables them to spend time meaningfully shaping and developinging their personalities in different ways. Besides, it may be difficult for teachers to handle all the children since a class contains several students with separate characters. if not thoroughly monitored in school, children can also take on immoral habits such as fighting or bullying.
In conclusion, I believe sending children to school at seven or earlier has its own pros and cons. therefore, parents should adjust the schooling age appropriately for their offspring.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, in general, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52307692308 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97434553489 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609230769231 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2471750511 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.1875 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.125 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178911948111 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610728916197 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297515418911 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117606156507 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0176439322079 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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