Crime rates are likely to decline due to the advancement in technology, which will help prevent and solve crimes more easily.do you agree or disagree?
Crime rates are likely to decline due to the advancement in technology, which will help prevent and solve crimes more easily.do you agree or disagree?
Without any doubt, society is divided into two groups as per the distinct mindset of different people. Therefore, this has become a debate able issue whether new technology innovation has helped in solving crime rates in a possible method. This essay will not only shed light on both perceptions but also my point of view will be elaborated in the conclusion.
To commence with the first notion, there are myriad things to be shared in favor. first of all. in the current era, technology imparts an important role in finding any crime issues in a better way. people indeed get fear to do the crime, because of the new introduction of surveillance cameras. The second point is face recognition technology has huge potential for police weaponry against fighting the crime. To exemplify, recently outcome news on television that China has a vast screen kept in police sectors with the assistance of Artificial Intelligence and revolving cameras that helps in identifying any crimes and vandalism which is going on in their country. As a consequence, people will get afraid to do unwanted things in public.
Moving toward the second argument of the debate, the first point of the downside is that people who are doing cybercrime know every loophole to escape from this murder. For instance, nowadays,cube attack is prevalent in which stealing the identity of person, and looting money online is also due to the advance in technology. Apart from this, people can make fake identify profiles that make free from this kind of activity. As a result, officials face difficulties in recognizing the criminals as well as, these cybercriminals create viruses to block an entire network system which can damage any proof in the data storage.
In conclusion, according to my perspective, I concur that, although technology is beneficial in identifying crimes to a large extent, there are negative sides which might not be helpful in better way .
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: First
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Suggestion: In
...gs to be shared in favor. first of all. in the current era, technology imparts an ...
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Suggestion: People
...nding any crime issues in a better way. people indeed get fear to do the crime, becaus...
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Suggestion: , cube
...from this murder. For instance, nowadays,cube attack is prevalent in which stealing t...
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Suggestion:
...eficial in identifying crimes to a large extent, there are negative sides which m...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...which might not be helpful in better way .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07848837209 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77133889315 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0837857342 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395566988671 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115617361511 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19226065569 0.0667982634062 288% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272622915641 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.280640329582 0.056905535591 493% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 83, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: First
...re myriad things to be shared in favor. first of all. in the current era, technology ...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 97, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: In
...gs to be shared in favor. first of all. in the current era, technology imparts an ...
^^
Line 4, column 199, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: People
...nding any crime issues in a better way. people indeed get fear to do the crime, becaus...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 191, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , cube
...from this murder. For instance, nowadays,cube attack is prevalent in which stealing t...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 126, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...eficial in identifying crimes to a large extent, there are negative sides which m...
^^
Line 7, column 201, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...which might not be helpful in better way .
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, therefore, well, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1747.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 344.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07848837209 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30665032142 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77133889315 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610465116279 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 564.3 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.0837857342 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.1875 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.625 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.395566988671 0.244688304435 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115617361511 0.084324248473 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.19226065569 0.0667982634062 288% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.272622915641 0.151304729494 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.280640329582 0.056905535591 493% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.