The reading passges states about altruistic behavior by using examples of human and the meerkat. however, the professor introduced new findings in this field that those behaviors do not come from altruism.
First of all, the professor explains the sentinel meerkat already have had full amount of meals before standing guard for the ohters. Moreover, since the sentinel has a chance to observe first its predators, it most likey to escape when the other meerkats get in trouble. however, the reading passages explain this as a unselfish beahavior to save its memebers of group.
On top of that, the alram that the meerkats create can draw the predators attention. Also, because of this alram, the meerkats gather together in one limited area, which makes it hard for them to survive in dager. Therefore, the sentinel meerkat luckily makes a use of its chance of survival.
Finally, human donates its kidney seems like selfless behavior with the absense of any kind of appreciaiton, but actually the donor is given the non-moteral form of appreciation from its hospital, the patient, and the city community. For some people, this non-material reward consider much more precious than material reward in their lives.
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement It is more interesting to read a good book or see a good movie the second time than the first Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 76
- Altruism is a type of behavior in which an animal sacrifices its own interest for that of another animal or group of animals Altruism is the opposite of selfishness individuals performing altruistic acts gain nothing for themselves Examples of altruism ab 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement Television does not give people an accurate view of human nature Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 70
- Altruism is a type of behavior in which an animal sacrifices its own interest for that of another animal or group of animals Altruism is the opposite of selfishness individuals performing altruistic acts gain nothing for themselves Examples of altruism ab
- People should seek out information from a variety of news sources to be well informed 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...sing examples of human and the meerkat. however, the professor introduced new findings ...
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Line 3, column 273, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: However
...when the other meerkats get in trouble. however, the reading passages explain this as a...
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Line 3, column 319, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...r, the reading passages explain this as a unselfish beahavior to save its memeber...
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Line 5, column 65, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'predators'' or 'predator's'?
Suggestion: predators'; predator's
...m that the meerkats create can draw the predators attention. Also, because of this alram,...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, finally, first, however, moreover, so, therefore, kind of, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 10.4613686534 10% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 7.30242825607 41% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 12.0772626932 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 22.412803532 76% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 1373.03311258 75% => OK
No of words: 198.0 270.72406181 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17676767677 5.08290768461 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55873260415 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676767676768 0.540411800872 125% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 3.25607064018 61% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 21.2450331126 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1318169558 49.2860985944 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.5 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 21.698381199 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8 7.06452816374 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121084168562 0.272083759551 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450969520023 0.0996497079465 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0266555934012 0.0662205650399 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0719032748354 0.162205337803 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310729813134 0.0443174109184 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.3589403974 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 53.8541721854 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.0289183223 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.2367328918 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.42419426049 112% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 63.6247240618 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.498013245 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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