Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?
From the Past few decades, it has become very common to have entertainment, such as going to art galleries,library, museums and other places all over the world. However, majority of museums demand cash for entering but there are a small number of them where admission is free. like the two sides of the coin, it also has positive and negative sides. The ensuing lines will try to analyze both aspects of the topic.
To begin with, the main advantage to charge for the entry to the museums is that they can offer better facilities to the visitors. For example, they can hire professional guided tour to get attention-grabbing details and describe ancient exhibitions which certainly government can not. Moreover, the entry charges can be used for their maintenance to preserve the cultural values and it will help in economic raise. As a result, charging in museums can be profitable for both council and common public.
On the other hand, the disadvantage to this is that it will decreases public's interest to visit museums. take students for instance, they will not willingly want to spend money for getting information from the museums. Instead, they would prefer to gain knowledge from the other sources like internet. Hence, to gather more visitors, there should be no fee to enter museums.
To sum up, it can be concluded that merits overweigh demerits of charging for the entry in museums. it is vital to maintain the diverse heritage present in museums and keep it neat and intact. So it is necessary for someone to take care of that. Therefore a nominal entry fee must be charged to enter the museums.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, moreover, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88727272727 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72515311572 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589090909091 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.0442602384 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1875 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287958298462 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898499102907 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744177134432 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161665255385 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458226172284 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.