Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house flat Write a letter to your neighbours In your letter explain the reasons for the noise apologise describe what action you will take

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Your neighbours have recently written to you to complain about the noise from your house/ flat.

Write a letter to your neighbours. In your letter

explain the reasons for the noise

apologise

describe what action you will take

Dear Mrs. Kapoor,

Hope you are doing well.

I got your mail about how you got into trouble by the noise that day. Sorry for the inconvenience caused by us. I felt so bad when I found out that due to our party you had to suffer again, extremely sorry for the trouble you had to face that day.

It was my son's 18th birthday, so all the family and friends were invited to the celebration. Everybody was delighted and enjoyed the party, which might have become a bit louder. And I just thought not to kill their buzz as it was for only once.

But, from now on, I assure you we will not create such a nuisance which will disturb your peace. Again, Apologies for whatever issue you faced that day.

I hope you forgive us and give us the chance to make the amendment.

Your loving Neighbour,

XYZ

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mrs. Kapoor, Hope you are doing well. I got your ...
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Line 7, column 246, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ill their buzz as it was for only once. But, from now on, I assure you we will n...
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Line 13, column 23, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he amendment. Your loving Neighbour, XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, well, as for

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 26.3917525773 49% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 661.0 937.175257732 71% => OK
No of words: 151.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37748344371 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.50545371207 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16141734155 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 127.690721649 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655629139073 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 197.1 290.88556701 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7235898601 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0909090909 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7272727273 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.90909090909 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260809113688 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087171261719 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882874910502 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145350074979 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109117286463 0.0580467560999 188% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.1 8.37731958763 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.53 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 24.0 41.2886597938 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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