The pie chart provides information on the ratios of carbohydrates, proteins, and fats in three different diets, which are the average diet, the healthy diet, and the body-healthy diet. sports.
Overall, there was a significant difference between the three substances in these diets. The number of carbohydrates makes up the main three types of diets. Sports people consume the largest amount compared to other groups of dieters. It contains 60% carbs, which is 10% and 20% higher than the proportions of carbohydrates in the average and healthy diet, respectively. In the average diet, the amount of protein is the same as carbohydrates (40%) and twice the percentage of fat (only 20%). In a healthy diet, the amount of protein is lower than in a normal meal (30%). The amount of protein in a healthy sports diet is quite modest, only 20%. Thereby, it is easy to see that fat seems to be the smallest nutrient of these diets (20% for the diet). average and healthy diet, healthy diet for sports is only 15%).
Nguyễn Đặng Trúc Quỳnh B2102368
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Sports
...ealthy diet, and the body-healthy diet. sports. Overall, there was a significant diff...
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Suggestion: Average
...trient of these diets 20% for the diet. average and healthy diet, healthy diet for spor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 1615.20841683 54% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 178.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87078651685 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70691507413 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.522471910112 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 243.0 506.74238477 48% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.4047603799 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8181818182 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1818181818 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.181818181818 7.06120827912 3% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309018982737 0.244688304435 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119006105849 0.084324248473 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742118528722 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176536779635 0.151304729494 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124865734295 0.056905535591 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.67 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.0 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 78.4519038076 37% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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