There have been some problems with public transport in your area recently.
Write a letter to the manager of transport company.In your letter,
Describe the problems
Explain how these problems are affecting the public
Suggest some changes that could be made
Dear Sir,
I have being living in the northern street, line number 42 of Laverton suburbs. I am writing this letter to bring your kind attention to one of the serious problems that we are facing related to public transport bus number 28 and 2A. Both the buses are running from our area Laverton to Melbourne metro Station.
However, from the past few days both the bus services are being suspended from 8:30 am to 10:30 am because of some road maintenance work. Since these bus services are being stopped, daily commuters need to catch alternate Bus number 59 for commuting.While commuting on the...
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No. of Words: 277 200
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 10
No. of Words: 277 200
No. of Characters: 1255 1000
No. of Different Words: 160 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.08 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.531 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.356 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 84 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 60 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 36 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 19.786 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 15.539 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.314 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.662 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.107 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4