Nowadays some countries are spending a lot of money to make it easier to use bicycle why is this so Is it the best solution to transport problem

--------------------These days, usage of bicycles are more and more increasing. Many people are also likely to buy more and more modern bikes nowadays. The result
is that many countries are increasing their production of bikes at its high peak and are making it easier to drive them and hence spending a lot of money
on them. Further information regarding this will be given in the furthermore paragraphs with the logical conclusion.---------------------------------------

-------------------------------To commence with the Pollution that is growing day by day in the plethora of nations, it is making it more difficult to appreciate one country's beauty.
That is the major reason behind this, that they are implementing more towards bicycles. For an instance, According to the survey conducted by the
Times Of World, it had been proved that 88% of pollution had been decreased by the usage of bicycles. Secondly, petroleum and other fossil fuels are
been depleting day by day. In regard to this, it has become a great need to use bicycles to save them. To cite an example, if such situations occur,
then our next generations will not get the opportunity to use such fossil fuels. So it's our duty to save them and to use more bicycles for some
distances instead of driving cars.-----------------------------------------------

---------------------------By considering all those viewpoints, it is better to discuss whether it is really good to spend crores in regard to this? So the answer to this is simply no.
Although there are a lot of benefits of making more cycles, on the other side of the coin, there are also some cons to this. Today in this modern
era, people are preferring bikes rather than cycles. Also, it is not convenient to use cycles, to travel longer distances, because ultimately it can make
our feet hurt after riding it too long. For example, if someone wants to travel from one city to another, then commuting by cycle is not the best
option because the ride can become too tired and also it will take long hours to reach our destination. However, by viewing the traffic
congestions these days, it will be best to use cycles more for short instances to reduce such kinds of issues.-----------------------------------------

-----------------------To sum up there are many motives for promoting cycles by the Higher Authorities which had been discussed in the above paragraphs. But it is not the
the best solution to solve transport problems.-------------------------------------

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Average: 7.1 (3 votes)
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IELTS Writing Task II - IELTS Academic

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te an example, if such situations occur, then our next generations will not get t...
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Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...pportunity to use such fossil fuels. So its our duty to save them and to use more b...
^^^
Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e them and to use more bicycles for some distances instead of driving cars. By...
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Line 13, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some cons to this. Today in this modern era, people are preferring bikes rather ...
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Line 14, column 13, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...his. Today in this modern era, people are preferring bikes rather than cycles. Also, it is n...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...istances, because ultimately it can make our feet hurt after riding it too long. ...
^^^
Line 15, column 35, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'longs'?
Suggestion: longs
...ake our feet hurt after riding it too long. For example, if someone wants to trave...
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Line 16, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ination. However, by viewing the traffic congestions these days, it will be best ...
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Line 19, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... in the above paragraphs. But it is not the the best solution to solve transport proble...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 145, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... in the above paragraphs. But it is not the the best solution to solve transport proble...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in regard to, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6825 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48341372912 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4263456901 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.65 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243390532068 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716422523725 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633340634942 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729891503974 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694537244834 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 149, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...te an example, if such situations occur, then our next generations will not get t...
^^^
Line 9, column 85, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...pportunity to use such fossil fuels. So its our duty to save them and to use more b...
^^^
Line 9, column 144, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e them and to use more bicycles for some distances instead of driving cars. By...
^^^
Line 13, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... some cons to this. Today in this modern era, people are preferring bikes rather ...
^^^
Line 14, column 13, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...his. Today in this modern era, people are preferring bikes rather than cycles. Also, it is n...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 14, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...istances, because ultimately it can make our feet hurt after riding it too long. ...
^^^
Line 15, column 35, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'longs'?
Suggestion: longs
...ake our feet hurt after riding it too long. For example, if someone wants to trave...
^^^^
Line 16, column 136, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ination. However, by viewing the traffic congestions these days, it will be best ...
^^^
Line 19, column 145, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
... in the above paragraphs. But it is not the the best solution to solve transport proble...
^^^^^^^^
Line 19, column 145, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
... in the above paragraphs. But it is not the the best solution to solve transport proble...
^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, for example, in regard to, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6825 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48341372912 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.52 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4263456901 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.65 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.35 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 17.0 4.38176352705 388% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243390532068 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716422523725 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0633340634942 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0729891503974 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694537244834 0.056905535591 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.