All around the world, Different cultures have different traditions. However, when you live in middle east countries like Iran, you have infinitive traditions due to your ancient background. one of the important traditions that are held every year is Nowruz. Nowruz is celebrated to declare spring embark. In my opinion, not only Nowruz is the most important and particular tradition for my family and country but also in wider territories. There are several reasons why I feel this way, which I explore in the following essay.
Firstly, Nowros is celebrated by every Iranian people without considering their religious tendencies; actually, it is a national ceremony, not a religious ceremony. Due to the diversity of Religions in my country, Nowruz is one of the best traditions to declare our solidarity. The diversity of religions in Iran is extensive, from Christian to Jewish and Zoroastrian and Islam. There is nothing worse than we do not have a common ceremony to celebrate. For instance, one of my friends is Jewish, and Nowruz can provide opportunities for us to spend more time together and consolidate our relationship.
The second thing worth bearing in mind is that Nowruz is linked to long-term vacations. As a result, usually, people's minds are not captive to work issues, and they can get together and spend more free time with families member. Meanwhile, My personal experience is a compelling example of this. I have gone to travel every Nowruz with my family.
The last but not the least point is that Nowruz increases the incentive's people to purchase supplies for haft sin (an important symbol of Nowroz); thus, it will yield substantial economic gains to people. For example, my sister sells out her productions before Nowroz; hence, she can earn substantial financial benefits.
In my opinion, Nowruz is one of the important traditions for my family and my country that has the broadest aforementioned mundane and spiritual results. This tradition shows us how to have an alliance and have more effective connections.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, so, thus, while, for example, for instance, i feel, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 43.0788530466 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 52.1666666667 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 333.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15315315315 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88773365675 2.67179642975 108% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 212.727598566 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.570570570571 0.524837075471 109% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3897761942 48.9658058833 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3157894737 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5263157895 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 5.45110844103 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234581816441 0.236089414692 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679970121366 0.076458572812 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0769388878091 0.0737576698707 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138861077469 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102595520914 0.0645574589148 159% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 86.8835125448 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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