As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability
of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate.
People relay more and more on technology to solve problems, yes, its true and I agree to it with some extent that people are dependent on it.
But its not true that people are loosing ability to think and solve there problems by there own. There are many things that says that humans are more capable that machines.
Let us take example of person who is on his business tour and visited New York and he took ride and reached to his work place in low fair and less time and his collogue who visited the New York for first time he took help from google map who consumed its time and money. This example shows that experience does matter in some situation rather that simply depend on machine to think. Basically the machine always learns from previously inserted data so new things comes in area we have to insert that data, this is not at all case with human we think of multiple options at same time and make decision.
In other ways we can still say that technology made Human work easy as we have washing machine we we can just simply start and leave for some time and do some additional works. Online meeting is some times key to save time and money. There are many such examples by which we can say our life got easer by technology. Although there are some technology which which we are getting depend much now a days that is calculator which are used for basic calculation also, earlier it was done in our mind. Mobile phones are the devices which we are fully depend on now a days.
Although we are depend on technology we cannot say that we have lost our ability to think. As many new inventions are made in science now a days for example Lithium battery car which is made by company name Tesla who can automatically charge it self while car is moving. This was recent invention, this point we can prove that technology is not deteriorate our mind, technology is saving our time and allow us to think and imagine more things than before.
Hence we can say that author point which says that "As people rely more and more on technology to solve problems, the ability
of humans to think for themselves will surely deteriorate." not valid at all. As above example proves that Technology just make our work easy and give more time to imagine and think.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, so, still, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 14.8657303371 128% => OK
Relative clauses : 26.0 11.3162921348 230% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 55.0 33.0505617978 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 58.6224719101 70% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1865.0 2235.4752809 83% => OK
No of words: 415.0 442.535393258 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49397590361 5.05705443957 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 4.55969084622 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24012161916 2.79657885939 80% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.46265060241 0.4932671777 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 613.8 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.8607306779 60.3974514979 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5625 118.986275619 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9375 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.625 5.21951772744 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 10.2758426966 88% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.83258426966 124% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294823929043 0.243740707755 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111083242738 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.126315101082 0.0758088955206 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209726403846 0.150359130593 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117940764122 0.0667264976115 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.1639044944 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.38706741573 90% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.8971910112 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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