The reading claims that the elaborate carving suggests that stones may have marked the important social status of their owners.and provide three supporting reasons.
However the professor says the stones are non very important and refutes each claim in the reading.
First the reading states that the stones were weapons used in hunting or fighting conversely the professor argues that those stones show signs of ware if used as weapons and they will be crack or some parts will break off the weapons should disappear any signs of damage.
Second the reading claims that were used as part of aprimitive system of weights and measures.but the professor contests this he says that their Masses not use as uniform uses , they have different density two balls of same size have different weight.
Third the reading states that they are used for social purpose as apposed to practical or utilitarian one this view is supported by the fact that maney stone balls have elaborate designs but, the lecture says that no marker for two reasons first ball carved in different pattern some are complex other are simple, and no presence of them in caves.
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are non very important
are not very important
First the reading states that the stones were weapons used in hunting or fighting conversely the professor argues that those stones show signs of ware if used as weapons and they will be crack or some parts will break off the weapons should disappear any signs of damage.
Description: can you re-write this sentence? Don't forget punctuation marks.
Second the reading claims that were used as part of aprimitive system of weights and measures
Second, the reading claims that they were used as part of a primitive system of weights and measures
their Masses not use as uniform uses
their Masses are not used as uniform uses
first ball carved in different pattern
first, balls are carved in different patterns
Sentence: Third the reading states that they are used for social purpose as apposed to practical or utilitarian one this view is supported by the fact that maney stone balls have elaborate designs but, the lecture says that no marker for two reasons first ball carved in different pattern some are complex other are simple, and no presence of them in caves.
Error: maney Suggestion: money
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
Don't forget punctuation marks.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 15 in 30
Category: Poor Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 5 12
No. of Words: 192 250
No. of Characters: 936 1200
No. of Different Words: 112 150
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.722 4.2
Average Word Length: 4.875 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.237 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 69 80
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 47 60
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 23 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 19 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 38.4 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 16.007 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.542 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.784 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.253 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 3 4